Chapter 9 Page 10

July 2nd, 2015, 8:43 am

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Reply LogicShogun, July 4th, 2015, 2:41 am

CRITICAL OPINION/ADVICE Wow, 200 pages and only 4 fans? After reading a few chapters, it's pretty interesting, and I think that people dismiss it because the art style at the start looks relatively bad, although later in the comic it does get better, but still your anatomy can use some work (I mean on the normal people, I know Toru is supposed to have stretched anatomy. Especially Chihiko's anatomy and face should be improved in my opinion.) It's personally not my usual cup of tea (I'll probably kepe up with it though), but I think those who like the genre would enjoy it if they can get past the relatively bad (but consistently improving) art style of the first couple chapters. You deserve more than 4 fans C: And stay away from the colored pages, the black and white is much better C:

EDIT: Also, work on your grammar. It could be as simple as proof-reading the page before you put it up (Things that come to mind are "definately" which should be definitely)If need be, get a friend to check it for you, or someone on the internet. Last resort, I'd be willing to help you with it until someone else could.

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